How does this Lilith story sound?

Wow, first I would like to say you are awesome for having an open mind. You may want to dig a little deeper into those legends though. You should read the Pseudepigrapha books (those left out of the bible when they made it). There you will find that it was God and the angles that wanted her to take a submissive position under Adam. When she refused the angles caught up with her fleeing somewhere by the sea and threated her with a curse if she didn't. However she refused anyway and had many demonic children. perhaps to spite. Some texts also say that she was not created by God,but rather summoned from the great abyss. Some also say that she later came back to Adam and raped him to beget Cain and that both her and Adam were hermaphrodites.