What do you think of my Poem? FEEDBACK!?

Hi, I write poetry too, though a little differently. I've been doing it for three years and such, so I have seized to rhyme. Yours does though and that's perfectly fine. I was a little confused through out the poem, but that could just be me. Also, I thought I saw some of the material repeating, too. Again that could be just me, but in some parts it sounded like you said the same thing only phrased differently. I think its me though!! If its not, try and work on that. I did love how you rhymed the words. They weren't simple words like cat and bat and fat, and that made it much better, but what was the rhyming shcheme though? A rhyming poem needa a definate rhyming scheme.